you can't take the firmament from me

Even though this is written more like the traditional posts you see on gorgeousnerd/cho_malfoy, I'm putting this on firmament because of LJ post character limits. (I could just post it in gorgeousnerd and not crosspost, but whatever, this is how I roll.)

Anyway! I took fic commentary requests here, and sylvaine requested Dying Embers, my werewolfbigbang story from 2010. And there's two things you should know before I start this:

1. This is a Twilight story.
2. Most of my interest in Twilight is from a snarking/rebuilding perspective. But not always.

If you hate Twilight and the occasional admiration of certain elements bothers you, this post isn't for you. And if you love Twilight and don't want to hear any criticisms against it, this post also isn't for you. I also talk a bit about Sunrise in Winter, so if you haven't read that story, I recommend you give it a try first because it's one of those experience-is-half-the-fun stories.

Ready? Let's do this!

( Fic commentary: Dying Embers. )

Title: A Wolf in the Forest
Fandom: Twilight (books)
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Length: About 3600 words.
Characters/Pairings: Leah Clearwater/Angela Weber, Jacob, Seth, Bella, Renesmee.
Warnings: Spoilers for everything through Breaking Dawn.

Summary: Is there a way to find love, even when both parties are forced into considering it?

Notes: This story has more similarities to the last Femmeslash Friday story than I would have liked, but I had the idea for this one before I ran into problems with my Iron Man story, so I decided to go with it anyway. Extended notes after the story.

( A Wolf in the Forest )